After writing several non-fiction books, I decided to make the leap to writing fiction in November 2009. I had been held back by my own brain for many years but I finally committed to finishing a novel.
These posts represent my journey in chronological order, so I hope they help you on your own path to writing your first novel. In them, I share my progress as well as lessons learned along the way.
Need help with writing your novel? Check out my Novel Writing Resources.
[Pentecost was rebranded STONE OF FIRE in 2015, and Prophecy into CRYPT OF BONE. Click here to read about the rebranding.]
Novel started at NaNoWriMo, 2009
Oct 21, 2009: Creativity bubbling, waiting for NaNoWriMo to explode: Lots of ideas, ready to start! Working title is ‘Mandala'.
Nov 1, 2009: Day 1 NaNoWrimo (National Novel Writing Month) : I haven't planned enough, my mood song for writing
Nov 6, 2009: Day 5 NaNoWriMo and lessons learned : my heroine is kick-butt, I'm writing fast but badly, I've bought the novel URL!
Nov 12, 2009: Day 11 NaNoWriMo , writing on the train, and meta-docs
Nov 19, 2009: Day 18 Nanowrimo: moving house killed my word count, you can't edit a blank page, dialogue helps to sort out a problem – get the characters to talk about it
Nov 27, 2009: Day 26 NaNoWriMo: I made the mistake of printing and starting to edit (ouch), started using ‘Write or Die' which helped word count, started writing fight scenes (so difficult I did a podcast with fight scene guru Alan Baxter later)
Dec 9, 2009: NaNoWriMo roundup: I'm learning a lot, I'm an outliner, I want to model success in the thriller genre
The first draft: I start learning the craft of writing
January, 2010: My goals for 2010 include completing the novel by end of 2010. I start learning from the professionals beginning with James Rollins on thriller writing. I also discover Outlining and it makes a big difference to the plot.
February, 2010: I get into Character based writing, and write scenes about places I haven't been before, plus I get into how to write a decent 3 dimensional villain
March, 2010: I learn about writing for high stakes like Dr Who, how writing is more like an emerging sculpture that involves hacking away at the block of stone before making it to the fine detail, and how mind-mapping can really help with writing scenes.
April, 2010: I can't decide on whether to use a Prologue, so I research How and When to use Prologues, I also update you on the novel progress at 40,000 words. Mind-mapping, listening to rain, joining a writing course and learning a lot.
May, 2010: My dialogue sucks, so I share tips on how to improve it!
June, 2010: I update my goals at mid-year. I will now finish the novel, get it edited and enter it into Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award in Jan 2011. I also learn from Scott Sigler how to become a NY Times bestselling novelist. Here's my video update including breakthroughs in plotting.
Editing, Rewriting and Cover Design
August 2010: I get into editing in a big way, rewriting the whole novel scene by scene. Why do we read fiction and why do we write fiction? I ponder the meaning of it all! I also write the ending of the novel and share some tips from pros on Twitter.
September 2010: As part of the rewrites I go on a field trip to research shooting guns. I also discover and explain why you need a professional editor before your book BEFORE you submit it to anyone (especially for a first-time novelist). Click here for my list of editors and proofreaders.
October 2010: I am about to submit my book to my editor, and discover it's important to read your book out loud before you submit it. I suffer a crisis of confidence and talk about what to do when you think your writing is terrible. I am also ready to start a marketing plan and I need the book cover to get this moving, as visuals are so important. I work through cover design options with Joel Friedlander and we come up with several options which over 500 people vote on and also leave 135 comments on. It's a crowd-sourced event!
November 2010: The votes are in and the cover for Pentecost is finalized. I love it and it wouldn't have happened without the blog audience, so thank you! I do a video interview with Joel Friedlander, my Book Designer and we go through the options and discuss why this is a great cover.
I also get my Editorial Review from Steve Parolini, the Novel Doctor. In this article, I reflect on how it feels to get the feedback and what the rewriting process is like. Then I interview Steve (audio and video) and he explains what an editor does anyway – brilliant tips for all authors here.
Time to write the back blurb so I find out all about it and post mine here for you to review.
December 2010: A personal post on copy-editing and beta-readers, oh the pain of editing!
Feb 7 2011: Pentecost is launched and available in print or as an ebook. I did a whole load of interviews and guest posts all listed here. I also made a book trailer as below which actually got quite a lot of attention. During launch week, I got to #1 on Amazon.com movers and shakers as well as ranking:
# Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #370 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
* #4 in Books > Religion & Spirituality > Fiction
* #5 in Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Fiction > Religious Fiction
* #62 in Books > Literature & Fiction > Genre Fiction
#96 in Thrillers on Amazon.co.uk.
During the launch week I was pretty overwhelmed and tired as well as excited and happy, so I posted this video about how it feels to finally have your book out there. It's an honest view!
In this podcast audio, I discuss the various aspects of the Pentecost launch with indie author Zoe Winters. What worked and what didn't including free aspects and paid advertising.
May 2011 – I receive the first royalty cheque for Pentecost and on the same day, the book shoots up to #277 overall on the Kindle store. 3 months in and it's still in the bestseller lists for Religious Fiction & Action-Adventure. Exciting times!
I'm interviewed by publishing expert Dan Blank on How to Market and Publish a Book.
I'm also interviewed on The Hopkinson Report, a marketing podcast on How to write, self-publish and market a religious thriller that kills on Amazon.
August 2011 – 10,000 books sold, Sales Figures for Pentecost and how my publishing plans are changing
October 2011 – Pentecost makes it onto The Huffington Post as a Halloween Indie special
I start working at The London Library which really helps my writing process for the 2nd novel, Prophecy.
July 2012 – Over 40,000 books sold, and I sign with a New York literary agent. (I later split amicably from this agent and remain an independent, licensing my own rights through my publishing imprint, Curl Up Press)
April 2015 – I retitled and rebranded the first 3 books of the series. Pentecost became Stone of Fire.
The ARKANE series now has 11 books, available in ebook, print and audiobook formats.
You can find details about my fiction at www.JFPenn.com
Need help with writing your novel? Check out my Novel Writing Resources.
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1 2 3 4 Next »Hi Joanna,
Congratulations on finishing the first draft! I imagine you must feel exhilirated and tired, as though you've made it to the top of a high mountain and now realise you've still got to walk all the way back down before you can rest.
I'm afraid I'm still plodding away in the foothills near that particular mountain. I write and edit work for other people every day but shelve my first novel for another time.
Perhaps I'll get a stomp on now that you've taken time to mark out the path and your own progress. Congratulations again and thank you for the blog.
Joanna,
I love your blog, tweets, etc. Congratulations on finishing your first draft. I'm sure you feel a great deal of satisfaction. I finished mine (also a thriller) about six months ago and have completed three edits since. I find it great fun to polish because of the growth of my characters in the process. I'm sure you will as well. Best of luck.
We knew you get it done, Joanna! You brought out some kung-fu writing skills to finish the first draft, but to add another metaphor, there are many belts before you reach the heights of Grand Master. :) That being said, you have the tenacity to get through the rest of the drafts and edits.
Congrats, Joanna, I hope Pentecost zooms to No. 1 on Amazon and everywhere else.
You are an inspiration to us all.
My plan for 2011 is to start with flash fiction and work my way up.
Thanks Rohi. I wish you all the best with flash fiction, it's something I haven't actually tried!
Hi Joanna:
I have only recently become a subscriber to The Creative Penn after having read your guest post on Larry Brooks' Storyfix blog. You are very generous with your ideas, advice, links, podcasts and videos and I really appreciate it. I am committed to finishing my first novel (which has been percolating in my brain for years) this year and I know I will learn a lot from you about writing and publishing in a 2.0 world. After reading about your "journey" with Pentecost I am inspired and motivated. Thank you.
Doug Smith
Alberta, Canada
P.S. I ordered Pentecost from Amazon Canada and I am looking forward to spending some quiet reading time with some tea and your book.
Thanks Doug - I'm so glad the blog is useful to you - and thanks for your support with Pentecost!
Wait wait! :) I'm so confused. You published independently, but you have books in print?
Hi Ben, yes, you can publish independently in print. There's nothing stopping you :) Most people use print on demand - more about all this here
http://www.thecreativepenn.com/publishing/
Thanks, Joanna
Awesome, thanks Joanna. I haven't researched the topic in a while, and for some reason forgot about POD.
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